When my friend told me
he was in love with someone else,
my thoughts
turned to Greco-Roman models
for inspiration. Also,
the letdown
of milk since the body is relentless. A troll on Twitter.
It was snowing on all
the arches, on the atrium, the four
chambers of a chicken’s short-lived,
factory-style heart.
The word “psalm” comes
from the Greek word “to pluck
a lyre.” Maybe I can address you now.
My husband
will be furious.
Coward. Liar. A voice says, “Alice, why did
you have another baby?” Exercise:
reread
the Ten Commandments (“Glass Box”)
I’m intrigued by the expansive
surrealism in Georgia poet Sandra Simonds’ latest poetry title steal it back (Ardmore PA: Saturnalia
Books, 2015). The author of Warsaw Bikini
(Bloof Books, 2008), Mother Was a Tragic Girl (Cleveland State University, 2012) and The Sonnets (Bloof Books, 2014), Simonds described her approach to
poetry in her recent “12 or 20 questions” interview, writing:
For me poetry follows
the logic of music and the logic of the body. I think you have to follow your
ear in order for a poem to work—you know the hidden story that can only be told
through blind faith in the sound.
The
structure of her poems appear constructed as a series of accumulations, built
as a montage of lines, thoughts and phrases that flow like endless, rushing
water. The repetitions, cadences and rhythms are quite striking in poems such
as the ten-section “Glass Box,” or the fourteen-section “The Lake Ella
Variations,” that includes: “Oh little green apron boy with the crappy gray
eyes, let’s watch / the sunrise over Georgia. Gave poetry book I hate five
stars on Goodreads; I am / such a liar! / What if I step on a syringe and get a
disease? / Who’s going to give me a lot of money so I can quit my day job and
write this poetry?” Alternately, the seven-page “Occupying” is a single block
of text, existing without punctuation but including capitals, suggesting new
phrases and/or sentences, adding to, as opposed to slowing down, the inertia of
the piece: “[…] I bet she is an excellent typist I bet she is a lot of things I
bet she has been to yoga today I bet she is noble I bet she speaks in hushed
tones I bet she is incredible I bet she is an incredible dancer I bet she is a
lot of incredible things I bet she dances every night […]”
Simonds
does seem to follow and favour rhythm and repetition, allowing certain phrases
to echo and repeat, using repetition not as a way to hold the poem back but to
hold elements of it together and to propel it forward, composing poems across a
canvas far larger than the single page.
Today I paid my
landlord
at the last possible
minute
on the last possible
day
of the month which is
on the 5th
day of the month.
It is the 5th
of November, 2012.
Poets hate their
landlords.
This is an imperative. It
has no grammar.
Maybe it has a crude
grammar.
I am not writing the
check until
the last possible
minute
in my car because I have
so much hatred in my
heart
for property and
landlords
but not land or streams
since I love the
Romantics
since I am also a
romantic
when I am not
practicing poetry
like going to TJ Maxx
and looking at my face.
I have been thinking
of the body of my
three-year old
and how it is so new
and unstable
and how I don’t want
him to ever feel
happy in this world.
I don’t mean it like
that.
I want him to feel joy
but not happy in the
sense
that he feels content.
(“A Poem for Landlords”)
There
is a fierce intelligence and swagger to Simonds’ poetry, constructed with
precision and an excess of wild energy; a poetry of rants, lectures, frustration,
unease and pleading, passionate gestures. “I am writing this so quickly.” she writes,
near the end of the piece “A Poem for Landlords,” a poem rife with domestic specifics
and a rushed, harried breath. The poem ends: “I will post this on my blog /
immediately.”
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