Do not finish your work too much
It leads to death. When
you perfect
a field, a field cannot
breathe. If you touch her
ceaselessly, she will
numb to what is
soft. I say withhold the
fruit until the table
ripens. I have seen a
child wither and rot
from too much getting.
Sit at back of hut
and train your eyes to
drink. Given time, colors
may accept you as vessel,
ferment. Draw them
out—luxuriate in fume.
Every stroke
has an origin. A terrible
seed. These are mock
oranges, unfit to taste.
Except. Give in utterly
to the work and find that
everything has happened.
Rimbaud, for example.
Leave. Have your long life.
Outlive your children
even as you peruse
others’. The world is
books. Your hands may be
starved for its pages but
driftwood—by sea polished
to bone—stays jagged
where God has broken
the femur. The
missionary’s promise. In lieu of
mansion, erect lean-tos
on beaches you dreamt
into existence as though
they weren’t already there.
Any pleasure that lives
lives in its endless washing
away, how far sin drifts
beyond a girl’s hurt
before ocean returns it,
ground to find volcanic
pitch. Art you do not
conclude, it is what it will become,
however unlikely. It
cannot be helped.
(Paul Gaugin) (“Arearea
no varua ino”)
The latest from Pennsylvania writer Kirsten Kaschock is the poetry title AutoPortrait (as flotsam) (North Adams MA: Tupelo Press, 2026), following Unfathoms (Slope Editions, 2004), A Beautiful Name for a Girl (Ahsahta Press, 2011), WindowBoxing (Bloof Books, 2013) [see my review of such here], The Dottery (University of Pittsburgh Press/winner of AWP Donald Hall Prize, 2014), Confessional Science-fiction: A Primer (Subito Press, 2017), and Explain This Corpse (Lynx House Press, 2020), with a further, Docenture: A Tale of Hue as Told by the Estate, forthcoming from South Indiana Review Press. As the back cover offers, this collection is arranged as a kind of gallery-walk response to the works of other artists (predominantly visual artists), as Kaschock offers individual responses across the lyric to works by Paul Gaugin, Alice Neel, Mark Rothko, Vincent Van Gogh, Joan Miro, Amadeo Modigliani, Jean-Michel Basquiat, Theo Jansen, Arthur Garfield Dove, Gerard Manley Hopkins, Pablo Picasso, Jacob Lawrence, Sinead O’Connor, Michael Stipe, Paul Klee, Edvard Munch, Donovan, Eva Hesse, Berye Saar, Joan Mitchell, Lucille Clifton, Romaine Brooks, Cy Twombly, Lucian Freud, Louise Bourgeois, Helen Frankenthaler, Mark Chagall and Francisco Goya. “They will never know what not to do / with you. This is a layering,” she writes, to close the poem “Contingent,” citing Eva Hesse, “a vanish into / potential, a technique to impossibilize / biography. My material they may long to have // illuminated. But I am no monk, no man- / uscript. And within this doubt / no woman you cannot.”
Structured in three parts—“Maiden (woman),” “Daemon (bird)” and “Nomad (star,” each section holds a cluster of poems, offering her individual responses to specific artists, many of which then extend from that initial response as a kind of prompt into further exploration through memory, memoir and specific experiences. It is as though her poems responding to artists are utilized as touchpoints; offered as a way to jump further into and through specific subjects, memories or conversations. “What happens / happens because of the way light twists / as it filters in.” she writes, earlier in that same poem for/after Eva Hesse. The follow-up, or extension, of that particular piece begins:
After college I tempted across Manhattan, tightroping overtime between skyscrapers until I had enough for a ticket.
In Paris in late March, sky and buildings fought a dovegray and off-white war, the low architecture invariably wearing its subtlety with more panache, churches interrupting. But I developed a fondness for the clouds amassing from fields like on a market day. Also d’Orsay, all arches and color and clocks.
Three weeks I stayed with my aunt and her husband outside the city as it bloomed—the path down to the RER along the Marne, the windowboxes, umbrellas, cemeteries.
They worked.
Those initial poems on and for and around artists, whether as prompts or anchors, even backdrop, against what the rest of her narratives touch upon; holding the poem in place, after which follows a more fluid lyric, free-floating and extended, confident enough through that opening section to know that the poem is rooted in place, allowing the remaining lyric the freedom to explore. “I gave the name Agnes to the protagonist of a novel I set in central Pennsylvania,” she writes, further beyond the poem “Caryatid,” responding to the work of Amadeo Modigliani, “not far from my childhood home and where the flood’s damage was heaviest. My family moved from Ithica when I was two. Not odyssey, a simple car trip, straight down the map, the car blue. // The hurt one accrues living in certain locations can be gothic. Wet leaves, saplings sprouted from porch gutters, beauty described in apathy. Our house sat ten miles from Three Mile Island. During the meltdown, we were evacuated, briefly—the meltdown partial, a mere near-catastrophic seeding dread.” How do the follow-up stretches and the initial poems responding to artwork relate? Composed across a sequence of posts and threads, pins and flayed lines, Kaschock’s lyrics are gestural and theatrical, a narrative-as-collaged-fragment, working to stitch together what she has deliberately pulled apart, seeking out the possibilities of new lyric and narrative shapes, new forms. “Make no mistake,” she writes, as part of the opening poem, “mistakes are work.”

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