MY PHONE SAYS
11 and
raining
and that
seems right
a grey green
anyone
could fuck
with as lush
but
foreboding one
clunk where a
thought
drops or
never forms
through this
incessant
interruption
of narrative
follow the
emotional
trajectory to
see what
hurts head
held
under lightly
dripping
water that
will keep
falling until
the call
is dropped.
The Ends of the Earth (Toronto ON:
ECW Press, 2013) is Vancouver poet Jacqueline Turner’s fourth poetry
collection, all of which have been published by ECW Press – Into the Fold (2000), Careful (2003) and Seven Into Even (2006) [see my review of such here]. In The
Ends of the Earth [see my review of the earlier chapbook version here], Turner opens by exploring ideas of the apocalypse in
myth and popular media, before ending the collection with a shift of the title
metaphor, from disaster to geographical ends, writing to coincide with the
period she was artist-in-residence at Gorge Cottage in Launceston, Tasmania. The
shifts are subtle, and the geographical “ends” are introduced as a sly, subtle background
as the collection opens, becoming more obvious through sprinkled references and
the title section, which closes the book. It’s as though the collection starts
with one idea, only to begrudgingly admit by the end that an end can also be a
beginning. Certainly, there is much to be pessimistic about, and Turner writes
of castaways, monuments, rebuilt/overbuilt cities and Vancouver geographies, in
a far more lyric (and less ironic) way than Toronto poet Steve McOrmond’s The Good News About Armageddon (London
ON: Brick Books, 2010). In the poem “INTEGRATED ABSENCES,” she writes, “Figure
2: Who would go to the ends of the earth for you/us now?”
7. Monument: Times Square, New York
I know I didn’t
raise you perfectly, didn’t even
try sometimes:
let you cry a second too long
didn’t listen
at the right time to stories
about boys
arranging fights, I didn’t argue
with teachers
enough didn’t sign you up
for the right
activities on time maybe missing
what you
could have been playing a violin
a black
turtleneck sweater living in New York
your
girlfriend a flautist in the row ahead
I want to say
what’s between us is wood
like Rich
said with a gift for burning
want to bring
the contradiction into language
to say I am
near and you are far and I’m also
far and so
on: I want to crimp that
transparent
thread, but I can’t break it
I want
mountains for you, deep deep snow
while my back
sinks into sand on the beach
transposing
climates to play out this slow turn
(“MONUMENTS TO AUDACITY”)
The book
opens with a reference to a baby, “wait for a baby to be / born around the
other / side of the world wonder / at rain outside the window” (“11 – 11 – 11”),
a thread that continues throughout the collection, referencing boys, babies and
other small children, such as the poem “Seven Billionth Baby Born Today:
October 31, 2011.” Through the repeated references to children, the pessimism
becomes more active, more dire, as though contemplating some grand contemporary
and future failure, affecting them far more than the narrator him/herself.
Turner,
throughout her published poetry collections, appears to favour both the poetic
sequence and the book as her unit of composition, as well as an exploration of
the prose poem, all of which exist in this newest work. Her poems exist as
single sentence-thoughts, with each poem composed as a single stanza or a
single breath, continuous and sometimes breathless, often accumulating into
longer sequences. In the section/sequence “They Lie About The Weather,” Turner
composes a series of poems, most of which include the phrase “at the end of the
day,” wrapping a handful of poems each around the same line. Utilized as a kind
of foundation to ground each piece, Turner discusses various examples of
construction throughout Vancouver (“i could watch you rotate all day / among
the cities i love”), environmental sustainability, and climate failings, such
as in the poem “CONTEMPLATIVE,” ending with “your deep red makes the sky what
it is / grey exists and this is what we make of it / your hand reaches in and
levels a day upward.” Some of the most interesting and compelling work in the collection
exists in the “Castaway” prose sequence near the end of the book, written more
lyric than other pieces, epistolary pieces for sailors and travel:
2. Castaway
dear sailor
every night the stars speak of you. the north star seems particularly infatuated
with your image and whispers adagio as salty spray hits your worn back. a moment
here is eternity light folds into waves and this world is rebuilt second by
second, an ephemeral mirage. the tissue of our connection floats on the wind, a
lost kite that may some day be returned to its flyer. i have cast out many
strands, dear sailor, i have told the stars this story.
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