DATE
MUSIC
To be pitted: whistled through with wind enough
to anchor every anther-fleck. The daily drama: keeping time. Do tell of the
sharp note doubt makes in the lay, how gold-bronze turns tamarack or snuff, how
heat’s details draw out your sweet debut. Be guileful, dauntless, slight,
adroit. Regret orr, my jewel, translucent and unknown. Curated, handled,
hand-picked: from the first, your bearing’s blown.
American poet Amaranth Borsuk’s second full-length collection is Pomegranate Eater (Tucson AZ: Kore Press, 2016), a volume of
striking lyric poems that play off classical myth, lineages and classical
artworks, from her opening poem “Self Portrait as Radiant Host” to pieces such
as “Cubist Landscape with Immolation,” “Portrait of Death as Pine-Eater” and “Landscape
with Openings.” Further on, by the third section, the focus leans toward
elements of myth, from poems such as “Legend in Which a Diligent Clock Is Made
to Speak,” “Fable Wherein Contra Band Encounters Boon,” “Parable in Which One
Wrestles a Double,” “Allegory in Which a Gregarious Knife Is Buried” and “Apalogue
with Substitutions in Which a Shift is Made.” What becomes intriguing about
Borsuk’s poems is in how far she is willing and able to float across dreamy
spaces, utilizing a series of voices, even as she holds one foot in the
concrete, anchoring each poem before it falls into an impossible abstract. Pomegranate Eater contains poems held
together with a precise and lyric language, somewhere between diamond precision
and a kind of liquid permanence. Part of what appeals about this collection is
in the musicality of her lines, the way the lyric flows and ebbs, shifting amid
and between meaning and pure sound, as she writes in the poem “FORTIFIED
INTERNAL NIGHT”: “Don’t porrect, I sum but a massive / simper, a lost-cause
turnip voluptuary. / Suspend voluntary seeming solicitude. / All I want you
magnify—sad suspect, / I’m present, a fringilly condensed / fugue-yahct. Noon cellar
risky gravity / orchid tantrum. I negate risk; I’m / mum.” Her poems pop and
sizzle, and sparkle across a range of fireworks and sun reflecting off of
running water.
DEAR
URGENCY
What takes us apart:
shadow-breath of a bulb kept close to the wall,
this trying to fingerprint each thing we touch.
I wait to write myself funder
your fingernails, to ring
through dark knuckle hair.
The trick is to see things as they are:
locked boxes, chain coils, a wealth
of hooks we anchor to.
This thing we’re building is a room, no more.
A small space to stem the hurt.
Yours,
Surge
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