David Bartone’s first book, Practice on Mountains, was selected for the 2013 Sawtooth Poetry
Prize by Dan Beachy-Quick, for publication with Ahsahta Press (2014). Poems
have appeared in Colorado Review, Denver
Quarterly, Mountain Gazette, VOLT, jubilat and others. (https://ahsahtapress.org/product/bartone-practice-on-mountains/)
1 - How did your first book or chapbook change your
life?
Too soon to tell, really. It’s only been a few weeks. I
had perceived Practice on Mountains,
(https://ahsahtapress.org/product/bartone-practice-on-mountains/) from as soon as I started to
think of it as anything of a book, as something that might come later, after a
different sort of collection of poems. It could be second or third or fourth,
what-have-you. Practice on Mountains
was always to me the writing behind the writing—the writer’s mere hours, the
pickling of being the person behind them, the secret writing you do for other
and primal reasons. Then Jeff Downey and Zach Savich, to whom for having a way
of bearing my heaving the book is dedicated, thought so surely it was a fine
thing to try to put in the world. Only Ahsahta and a few other places seemed
right from the start, and Dan Beachy-Quick (https://ahsahtapress.org/product/work-from-memory/) whose work I’ve been reading for
many years, selected it for the Sawtooth (https://ahsahtapress.org/open-submissions/sawtooth-poetry-prize/), and so I’m glad it all has
happened the way it has. I am still startled it is in the world as a book. A
few writers I revere have written to me about it—that’s the sugarplum of having
a book out. And so it all affirms possibility.
How does your most recent work compare to your
previous? How does it feel different?
Recent work is to say the work of always—I’m dyed in
the wool to searching for new wondering ways. A few years ago I would have said
wilder ways, but then some pretty difficult illness left me reaching for
lasting calm. Though, how does my farmer say it: “Heavier the hand that holds
the hoe still.” We shall see.
2 - How did
you come to poetry first, as opposed to, say, fiction or non-fiction?
Came to mathematics first, really. I remember car rides
to dad’s, in the back seat with my brother’s TI-80. But it wasn’t for the
definiteness of the subject. I think it was more for the sequential learning (first
you learn to measure distance, then velocity at an instant, then a thousand
points of light). It’s pretty easy for teenagers to want whatever’s next, and
for me want manifested in calculus. In poetry, some 20 years later, I can say I
find it more for consequential
learning, which has more meaning-making to it.
But as for the earliest poetry that stuck, it was
probably a college homework reading of Bishop’s “At the Fishhouses” (http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/182896) that supplied an early epiphany.
I liked it more than whatever I would have been reading for pleasure, Burroughs
or something. (Truthfully, I don’t remember reading all that much before
poetry.) I still regard the way she comes up against that definition of
knowledge several times before letting the smooth clean rip of tongue onto the
page in that envoi…this to me is real and honest: to leave in the attempts of the
battering ram. They are, which is no secret, better then when the gate bursts
open.
3 - How long does it take to start any particular
writing project? Does your writing initially come quickly, or is it a slow
process? Do first drafts appear looking close to their final shape, or does
your work come out of copious notes?
Who hasn’t dallied in all the ways lies or bores!
I am an inspirational poet—that is, I don’t tend to
force it. And when it comes, it usually comes quick. A practice of remaining
available to poetry has helped me find little ways I think I can give more to
my poetry than take from it. A debt I will, no doubt, long be paying. Which is
something the travelling poets from Edo knew best. I reflect on this a lot. For
the past hundred years or so, in the West, we like to think of the haiku poet’s
travels as sacrificial, but it’s much simpler than that—it’s a giving back to
poetry, a gratitude in itself. Basho’s “The Knapsack Notebook” shows the very
giving the instant and inspired poet has to offer. Without such giving back I
would worry, how we worry our all-for-naught stitching and unstitching will
render us wrought, for how often it does.
4 - Where does a poem usually begin for you?
A moment’s thought! The some-little-uncannyism that will
catch me, be it natural or from some intoxication (such as waking or rest or
fitness or tea or love), and I’ll want to set down to write, or loll it around
with my wife or with friends. Keeps a good thing light. Also, I have terrible
hearing—I have wonderful mishearing—it helps.
Are you an author of short pieces that end up
combining into a larger project, or are you working on a "book" from
the very beginning?
Practice on
Mountains is a long
poem written in what now seems like a single swipe, with lots of things impulsively
cut out at real-time intervals. It is a consecutive poem. There are ellipses
throughout, and there are parts blocked off into poems, but that is cosmetic.
The form is a literal mark of the process. It seemed I could have written in
the form for a long time, but there was the fear of it becoming some
heavy-stitched scarring on the page. I wanted my marks to be more like the
cygnet’s footprints. I think of what Barbara Guest writes in “Wounded Joy”:
“What we are setting out to do is to delimit the work of art, so that it
appears to have no beginning and no end, so that it overruns the boundaries of
the poem on the page.” Delimiting has
to do with weight and air, and is a formal concern.
5 - Are
public readings part of or counter to your creative process? Are you the sort
of writer who enjoys doing readings?
Oh, I wish I were great at readings. My belief in
them—in the sung song, the lived love—is the very center of my creative
process. I like to read aloud. I like it when a fellow hiker catches me
reciting on the trail. We might spill into instant ravish of each other. Is
what I’m always hoping for. Is how I feel when I listen to a great reading,
such as Ted Berrigan’s “Red Shift” (http://mediamogul.seas.upenn.edu/pennsound/authors/Berrigan/Berrigan-Ted_Red-Shift_Exact-Change_12_7-25-82.mp3)
6 - Do you have any theoretical concerns behind your
writing?
No. I am more interested in very serious musings.
Poetry as proof needles me. I take Emerson’s essays as poetry. I take the translator’s
notes as séance.
What kinds of questions are you trying to answer with
your work? What do you even think the current questions are?
There are eleven remaining questions in poetry. (http://philadelphiareviewofbooks.com/2013/09/02/eleven-essays-im-not-writing-about-contemporary-poetry/)
7 – What do you see the current role of the writer
being in larger culture? Does s/he even have one? What do you think the role of
the writer should be?
I used to think all we ever had to hold ourselves to was
beautiful lines, beautiful sentences—each part worthy of some independent worship.
That’s how I would read Woolf and Lolita. Recently, Hilary Plum’s recent novel, They Dragged Them Through the Streets (http://www.berfrois.com/2013/02/they-dragged-them-through-the-streets-hilary-plum/), has done for me that and one
thing more. After too many years of stupid pride in fostering intellect and
political remove, the book walked me, in its way, to an understanding of what
the writer can be as anti-war activist, as anti-capitalist (though let me
elsewhere someday talk straighter to the praises her book rightly deserves). They Dragged Them Through the Streets, in the way the best literature does, re-enlivened
for me my years of reading some favorites: Oppen, Niedecker, Zukofsky. I wish I
could explain it better. The book put something meaningful in me where there
was already much, as well as where there was nothing. Writers can do this.
8 - Do you find the process of working with an outside
editor difficult or essential (or both)?
Not much to it but to share, listen, think, talk.
9 - What is the best piece of advice you've heard (not
necessarily given to you directly)?
Norman Dubie’s “Novel as Manuscript” (http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/22603) helps whenever the poems are
depleted of their human significance. (I love the word ‘new’ in this poem.)
10 - How easy has it been for you to move between
genres (poetry to critical prose)? What do you see as the appeal?
Don’t most things become poetry if a poet spends much
of any time on them? I am okay with the delusion that’s a good thing.
11 - What kind of writing routine do you tend to keep,
or do you even have one? How does a typical day (for you) begin?
This response, for example, comes after a conference
with a student who believes she has not learned anything outside of college,
and before I go to catch up on some stupid stupid emails.
12 - When your writing gets stalled, where do you turn
or return for (for lack of a better word) inspiration?
To the ideal of dawn. I may have only ever been awake
for thirty-five really good, white dawns, but they linger a long time. Also my
friend the farmer—his cows are either retired or else are now protected from commercial
production. They are kept alive out of some goodness in this world. They will
see about twenty years, most of them, which is something to speak of. (On
average, commercial dairy farm cattle are exterminated at six.) They walk
slowly, or sometimes will trot, as we walk to move fence in the green months, toss
hay in the gray. The golden retriever measures the perimeter for us, and the
barn cat follows us surprisingly far from the house. What they say about talk
with farmers is true.
13 - What
fragrance reminds you of home?
Woodstove and bread.
14 - David W. McFadden once said that books come from
books, but are there any other forms that influence your work, whether nature,
music, science or visual art?
For the past few weeks, I wish more of my poems could
function like a really good game of Arkham Horror. The environment is unstable
but not random. The core game’s system mechanics are designed to release new
variables at just the right timing so as to require players to make constant
adjustments to their character for their survival and success (and for each
character there is a limit to the amount the character can adjust). The game’s
theme encourages but does not require role-playing. I know many gamers complain
about the complexity of the rules, making the first few plays time-consuming
and perhaps frustrating, and it’s difficult to play with new players, but, come
on, get over it.
15 - What other writers or writings are important for
your work, or simply your life outside of your work?
Jeff Downey (http://thermosmag.wordpress.com/2013/08/07/thermos-9-jeff-downey/), Merrill Gilfillan (http://floodeditions.wordpress.com/2013/10/11/red-mavis-by-merrill-gilfillan/?relatedposts_exclude=701), Zach Savich (http://www.versedaily.org/2011/sufficiency.shtml), Anne Cecilia Holmes (http://sixthfinch.com/holmes3.html), Hannah Brooks Motl (http://www.kenyonreview.org/kr-online-issue/2013-spring/selections/hannah-brooks-motl-656342/), Song Cave (http://www.newfoundjournal.org/archives/volume-4/issue-2/poetry-alfred-starr-hamilton/), are some. There are so many
others.
16 - What would you like to do that you haven't yet
done?
The Knife Edge at Mount Katahdin.
17 - If you could pick any other occupation to
attempt, what would it be? Or, alternately, what do you think you would have
ended up doing had you not been a writer?
Apiarist, falconer, gentleman farmer, game-designer.
18 - What made you write, as opposed to commercial
fishing?
It ends up what watching the gulls work the surf out
on Island Beach State Park with Uncle Tommy is really the only thing about
fishing I actually like. It didn’t make much sense to try to turn it into some
sort of career.
19 - What was the last great book you read? What was
the last great film?
Rusty Morrison’s Beyond the Chainlink. (http://robmclennan.blogspot.com/2014/01/rusty-morrison-beyond-chainlink.html) Amy Heckerling’s Clueless.
20 - What are
you currently working on?
The daily
poems. Some for rescue, some for savour.
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